Unforgettable Saturday
The month was
July. Mike decides to find his old girlfriend Louise to know how his life was
going. He really did not want a rapprochement, but he wanted to know what she
was like, what she had done with her life, and whether, like him, she had
overcome her ghosts.
Although he
calls her girlfriend, we can not say that they actually have a boyfriend. She
came from a very Catholic family that did not allow courtship with young people
of any other religion. Mike did not know how strong this was in this family.
They were both in love, but her fear began to grow when she saw that
relationship would become serious. So, before she caused any more trouble, she
thought it would be the least of her pains ... and in tears she did it to him.
Half unbelievable, as in a modern world one still submits to concepts so
retrograde and conservative.
But he did
not find it in any social network, weird for that time where everyone is
connected by the great network. He remembered that she had a sister, Kate, and
went in search of her name on the nets - bingo! Found the person with the same
name and whose sister also had the name of the ex-girlfriend. What a crazy
thing! Two different families with two daughters with the same names !!!
Because I do not believe in coincidences, I knew something was prepared for
Mike.
When she
opened her sister's facebook, there was another Louise, not the one Mike had
met, not one she'd fallen in love with, but something linked her eyes like a
mesmerizing look, like a magician who by making fantastic numbers captures the
attentive gaze of the audience . He was there, completely hypnotized by her
picture, his smile seemed to give him a good day, and for almost five minutes
he could not move.
After a few
hours, after going and returning to the computer several times to look at it,
Mike decides to send an invitation, of these to be accepted as a friend in the
social network. He pressed the button and his hand went very high, as if to
say: Ready! Now there's no turning back, you're done!
It was not
long before she accepted, their first contact was already a harbinger of what
that relationship would become. Mike goes in the text box and says,
- Hi Louise,
I added you because I feel like meeting you ... if I'm wrong, forgive me, I do
not want to be inconvenient ...
To which she
quickly responds:
- Do not
worry, I also know you ... I also do not remember where ...
It seems that
the attraction was reciprocal and soon began an almost endless conversation
over the network. But there was a problem they did not expect - from a distance
- Mike lived in Savannah, Giorgia, and Louise lived in North Carolina, 500 km
away from Mike, which made the relationship very difficult because he worked
just like her . But they could not wait to be together. Mike waited for the
holidays to arrive, his would be in January, but Louise would still be working.
They decided that Mike would travel by car to the city where she lived.
Then came the
long awaited day. But first, I can not stop talking about Mike's eve. He
dressed like a gentleman. Bought a basket of wicker, those for picnic, went to
the market and filled her with goodies. Sweets, savory, cookies, cold cuts, and
did not miss the bottle of wine accompanied by two beautiful bowls. Ready ...
the basket was really beautiful with a towel and everything. The next day,
Mike prepares his car, puts the basket inside. He had not forgotten the
chocolate and a bracelet he wanted to put on Louise's arm. He well wanted it to
be a ring, but thought a bracelet would be lighter and more suitable for a
first date, even after almost six months of conversation. Still on the way she
thought of the flowers, but decided to buy it in her town because it was
summer, and she was afraid the flowers would fade into the car ... that would
be a disaster for a romantic man like Mike.
She picked up
her cell phone and texted her: Honey ... I'm leaving home. It's 7:00 in the
morning, and I hope to see you soon. She responded cheerfully, but he knew she
was very nervous, anxious and anxious for this meeting. For every town Mike
Passed, he sent a message saying he was getting closer and closer. And Louise,
for her part, had lost count of how many times she'd gone to the bathroom so
nervous she was.
Just after
lunch Mike came to North Carolina. She called Louise, her voice choking with
anxiety. "Good dear, give me half an hour to get ready, I just got home
from work. Mike went to a diner, lined his stomach and passed the time while
she was ready. Half an hour
later she went to the door of the condo where Louise lived. He still did not
know her personally, every person who left, Mike was watching ... is it her?
But after a few minutes she comes toward him. He seemed to be in slow motion.
Her shapely legs, shaped by ballet, black hair, long, slightly fluttered by the
wind that blew in North Carolina at that time, white, rounded eyes bringing
with them a sweet and pure look. Mike got out of the car, dressed in a pretty
black shirt, tight, long sleeves tucked into his fist, his collar and striped
blue and white cuffs on the inside. He wore a very chic shoe, almost for the
night, but his velvet blue tone with a leather detail said it could be worn by
day. A pair of cream slacks set the model by day.
The two walk
toward the other, with a smile on both faces. It was a few yards that looked
like a mile. But nothing passed around them. Eyes staring at each other until
they met ... their bodies touched, and he said in his deep, soft, deep voice:
Pleasure !, followed by a long-awaited kiss for both of them.
Let's have
lunch? Mike asked. Yes, I know a very nice restaurant on a small farm near
here, Louise said. The place was everything Mike expected. The conversation
flowed quietly, after all, it was six months of dialogue. When they arrived at
the restaurant, the two could not eat anything so much frisson of having each
other's presence after months of waiting.
When he
finished, Mike looked at a distance and saw a grassy plain in front of a lake,
did not waste time took Louise by the hand and said: Let's take a walk! He
passed the car, opened the trunk, and took out the basket. Louise almost fell
behind ... Mike, I can not believe you did that? I always dreamed of making a
picnic. The boy smiles inside almost saying ... Touchè, I hit it!
He took
Louise by the hand and basket in the other. They headed for the lawn. Mike
opens the basket and hands the towel over to Louise, and together they lay it
out on the floor. They begin to take things from within. Louise looks at Mike
with a look of whoever thinks ... This man really exists? The bracelet Mike
bought is taken from his pocket and placed on Louise's wrist. She loves it,
says she's in love with bracelets and rings. Mike tells her that it would be a
compromise bracelet, even though they would be connected and the bracelet would
be emblem of that union.
They spent
the rest of the afternoon in that surreal place and moment. Mike, in a mixture
of a gentle but intrepid man (perhaps in a more current and feminine language
... Gentleman with footprint) asks Louise: Can we go one step further? She says
yes. Then they collected their equipment without any haste, every minute was
worth an hour, and as much as they wanted to be together alone, there was no
hurry. It was a late
afternoon with lots of love. They both loved each other. Their bodies were
magnetized, eroticized, devoid of each other's curves. Mike seemed to know what
Louise wanted, and vice versa. Many hours of passion drove the couple mad.
They were
completely delivered, cheated, but happy and complete. Louise looks at Mike and
says: My love, I need to go. Mike did not seem to know what those words meant.
Louise would have visits from relatives that next Sunday. And in the car toward
her house Louise apologizes for not receiving him there and asks if he would
look for any hotel to stay the night. Mike says no, he would come home
immediately thinking of every minute of that day.
Louise was
worried that the distance was long, but she was out of action trying to
convince him to land in a hotel, much less stay at her house. During the trip they
talk to each other. It was cold, the dark night took over the beautiful Nuna
Rock Road, road that linked North Carolina to Florida. The weather was so good
that it did not force Mike to double his attention. In other times that road
was place of accidents because of winter snow and summer rains. But not on that
day. Everything was quiet, calm, so calm that Mike succumbed to physical
fatigue. He slept behind the wheel. His car pulled off the road and flipped
over several times.
Early on,
Louise calls Mike because she had asked him to send a message as soon as he
arrived, whatever time it was. But when she wakes up she does not see a message
on her cell phone and calls him. On the first attempt the phone rings several
times without anyone answering. Louise thinks he had passed out of fatigue on
the trip. An hour later she calls again because her heart began to feel
distressed, even with relatives at home she apologizes and takes a few feet
away to call. The phone rings twice so a woman answers, her body freezes, and
on the other side the person says,
- Hello! Who
speaks?
Louise still
does not know what to think, she asks another question:
- Is this
Mike's?
The woman
responds:
- Ma'am,
the head nurse at the Columbia hospital is the speaker. Are you related to Mr.
Michael?
Louise
trembled, did not think twice:
- I'm his
girlfriend.
- Madame,
I'm sorry to inform you that unfortunately Mr. Michael Staten died of an
automobile accident at 3:30 in the morning.
Louise can
not stand the news and faints. Her father takes her in his arms and tries to
wake her. Louise does not stop crying and feels as if something inside her has
died. Those last hours had become unforgettable for Louise. That Saturday was
the most unforgettable of his whole life.
It is not uncommon to see stories
similar to those of Mike and Louise. Some can have the beginning equal to the
different end, others with different start and the same end. The truth is that
this story makes us think that at any moment we can lose a great love. Any
moment we can miss a promising future full of dreams. What we need to learn is
to value every second and every person as if they were the only and last in our
lives.
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